Sunday, May 25, 2008

August-October Story

Let's keep our story going! Come inside here and add to our story. First read the story from the beginning. Remember to use lots of action verbs, adjectives that give us good mental images, and exciting details so our story will keep anyone who reads it on the edge of their seat! Here it goes:

Once upon a time in a land far away there lived a poor farmer boy. He had lots of brothers and sisters but he was the youngest, and no one in his family had very much faith in him. His brothers and sisters were always fighting and his parents never paid much attention to him. He was determined to make something of himself. He lived in the times of kings and castles and his one passion, his one true dream was...

13 comments:

Constantine's kid said...

to be a knight in shining armor. So that one day he could fight the BIG,GREEN,MEAN,UGLY DRAGON. The dragon had stole the princess and took her away from the castle. He had to rescue the princess!

Anni and Luay said...

One day, when he finally turned
16 (this was the age of a man in mideavel times) he decided to go to the castle to save his princess, so he spents months in hard training to get in shape to fight the dragon. when he was finally ready his father... the king, gave him his first armor, and he was on his way...

Constantine's kid said...

Then he got on top of his brother and pretended to ride through the wind. Then he got his rake and pretended to fight a dragon. Then he got a piece of metal and acted like he was in armor.

Constantine's kid said...

He rode threw
the forest and a pack of orks came at him with bowen erows,sords and axes. king Mordor had sent them what do you thing he will do next

Constantine's kid said...

King Mordor Was bad.After Fighting
the orks he rode over the mountain
and could see the castle.
he rode very fast threw the woods.
When he was riding in the woods he saw lot's of creatures, they were bad creatures.the creatures jumped out and started pocking swords at him.

Constantine's kid said...

So,he got on his horse,and went back to his castle.When he got there,he found his princess but, he could not find the king and queen! Where did they go???????

Constantine's kid said...

Then he gave the monsters a candy bar and they ran away in joy of the candy bar when he got to the tower he had a ork come on his side of the power of the candy bar.

Constantine's kid said...

the dragon had them he got his candy bars a went to get them back.

Constantine's kid said...

the princess was locked in the high tower.The knight thought the every body was hiding and was about to attack them then suddenly a pack of knights came running his way he started fighting he killed them in a heart beat.then he went up stairs to get the princess.

Constantine's kid said...

When he got their their was the dragon.He killed the beast but their were more.He freed the princces and went to get the king.

Constantine's kid said...

Hi my name is will he went to get the king when he got there 10 dragons where garding him I threw a candybar a they ran to it.He got the king and ran.

Constantine's kid said...

The door was locked he could not get in he could hear the princess crying so he he went down stairs to get the key but when he went to the key room there they were...
by:Douglas

Constantine's kid said...
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